Wednesday, August 11, 2010

Today’s prompt: Craft a scene in which your character is backed into a corner, pushed against the wall, driven to the brink. Force her into an emotional reaction that is the sort of thing she has never done before. What will she do? Why? What does this tell you about her that you didn’t know before?


Karly ran behind WT carrying Jack. When they reached Grandma's, Karly flew up the steps and held the door open for WT and then told WT to lay Jack down on the couch. Jack was moaning. Grandma walked in. "What happened to Jack?"   then she look at WT. What is he doing in here? Did he hurt Jack, Get out right now.  Grandma, he's only helping. He saved Jack from drowning. We have to take Jack to the hospital he hurt his leg. Maybe it's broken.  I'll call Mrs. Sather, she can drive Jack to the hospital. WT sat next to Jack and told  him he was a tough kid. Grandma came back into the room. Mrs. Sather is coming right now. WT began to pick up Jack. I think Karly can help carry Jack. We don't need your help. Grandma, WT is stronger than me so he can carry Jack. Fine, but he has to leave as soons as we get Jack in the car.

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