As I revise I noticed that I had all the senses except the sense of touch. I'll have to decribe the temperature of water or the feel of the ground. If the ground is muddy. I could write: I stepped in the mud and it felt as though my feet were being wrapped with something soft as dough. Or I felt as though I was walking through softened butter or thick cream. Or the mud felt mushy.

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